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The pie chart show the total spend by school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The pie chart show the total spend by school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. 1VPjn

The three pie charts depict the information about the amount spent by school during the years 1981, 1991 and 2001. The data has been calibrated in the form of proportion. It is crystal clear that most of the amount is spent on tutor salaries in all the three years. That is, 40%, 50% and 45% in 1981, 1991 and 2001, respectively. Whereas, the least money is spent on insurance in all the given years as it was 2%, 3% and 8% in 1981, 1991 and 2001, respectively. Considering the rest of the information, the percentage decreased from 1981 to 2001 in other workers salaries. A decrease from 28% to 22% in 1981 and 1991, respectively. Whereas, in 2001 it was remained just 15%. Besides this, expenditure spent on furniture and equipment was 15% in initial years and it was 5% in 1991. However, the percentage increase from 5% to 23% in 2001 and 15% of the amount was spent on resources in 1981. While, 9% in 2001. Hence, the maximum expenditure was spent on teacher’s salary in all the years.

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 on tutor salaries in all the three years. That is
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. Whereas, the least money is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
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 on insurance in all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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Considering the rest of the information, the percentage decreased from 1981 to 2001 in other workers salaries. A decrease from 28% to 22% in 1981 and 1991, respectively
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 on furniture and equipment was 15% in initial years and it was 5% in 1991. However
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spent
 on resources in 1981. While, 9% in 2001.

Hence
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spent
 on teacher’s salary in all the years. 