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The pie chart show how commutes from a city in the UK prefer to travel to work in 2020.

The pie chart show how commutes from a city in the UK prefer to travel to work in 2020. 5knaP
The provided pie chart illustrates, the information about the percentage of community preferences in one UK city in 2020 by different vehicles namely car, bus, train, metro as well as bike. After analyzing, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of individuals who prefer to travel by car is 33. 2 and 26. 3% community prefer to travel by metro which is less as compared to car. Train used by 18. 1% people in US. Further, the pie chart collate that community preferences for travel by bike is 5% in US whereas 9% bus is used by alternative in US which is more rather than bike. Overall, it is evident that percentile of car the highest that used by community however, the lowest percentage of community preference is bike in UK.
The provided pie chart illustrates, the information about the percentage of
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that the percentage of individuals who prefer to travel by
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car
is 33. 2 and 26. 3%
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community
prefer to travel by metro which is less
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car
. Train
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used
by 18. 1%
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people
in US.

Further
, the pie chart collate that
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community
preferences for travel by bike is 5% in US whereas 9% bus is
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used
by alternative in US which is more
rather
than bike.

Overall
, it is evident that percentile of
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car
the highest that
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used
by
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community
however
, the lowest percentage of
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preference is bike in UK.
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IELTS academic The pie chart show how commutes from a city in the UK prefer to travel to work in 2020.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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