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The pie chart represents work status of undergraduate students of Anthropology after finishing of their study per percent.

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The pie chart represents work status of undergraduate students of Anthropology after finishing of their study per percent. Moreover, the table illustrates type of employment and salaries of the anthropologists after five year. It is clear that a significant majority of Anthropology graduates had full-time work after graduation. Additionally, 15 percent of them had part-time work whereas, 12 percent were unemployed. Finally, 8 percent were in full-time postgrade study group, 8percent were in not known group and 5 percent located in part-time + postgrad study group. On the other hand, as can be seen in the table, anthroplogyists that worked in privat companies had lowest income. Aproximately 5 percent of workers in freelans consultants and government sector had income between 25. 000 to 49. 999 USD, while this number for private companies' workforce was 10 percent. Furtheremore, 50 percent of government sector workers had more than 100. 000 USD income whereas, this figure was 40 and 30 percent for people who worked in freelane consultants and private companies, respectively. All in all, 52 percent of Anthropology students had full-time work after graduation and just 12 percent were unemployed. Moreover, anthropologists who were recruited in government sector, had more income in comparison with people who worked private companies and freelance consultants5 years after graduation.
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