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The pie chart provides information on estimations of six various sectors globally between the period 2040 to 2060.

The pie chart provides information on estimations of six various sectors globally between the period 2040 to 2060. aQ9MG
The pie chart provides information on estimations of six various sectors globally between the period 2040 to 2060. Overall, Services region is going to be a prime sector in both the future years given while manufacturing is not far away than the former one. On the other hand, remaining fields of production seems to move at a steady rate. As it can clearly be seen in chart, almost three quarters will be equipped with only two areas which are services and manufacturing where former is expected to have 40% of share in 2040 which will then gradually increase till 41% and latter will start at 31% in 2040 and will go on to increase till 33%. While abundance of the market is already equipped by 2 main zones remaining four areas make up for the remaining 30% approximately. Even though, info-com tech will show a great dominance in 2040 with 15% it is only estimated to reach by 1% in next 20 years. An area to look out for is going to be agriculture since it will decrease from 4% in 2040 to 1% in 2060 on the contrary Materials would merely be increasing by a percent. Last but not the least energy is going to acquire 7% in 2040 of which will then fall by 2% in 2060.
The pie chart provides information on estimations of six various sectors globally between the period 2040 to 2060.

Overall
, Services region is going to be a prime sector in both the future years
given
while manufacturing is not far
away
than the former one.
On the other hand
, remaining fields of production seems to
move
at a steady rate.

As it can
clearly
be
seen
in chart, almost three quarters will
be equipped
with
only
two areas which are services and manufacturing where former is
expected
to have 40% of share in 2040 which will then
gradually
increase till 41% and latter will
start
at 31% in 2040 and will go on to increase till 33%.

While abundance of the market is already equipped by 2 main zones remaining four areas
make
up for the remaining 30% approximately.
Even though
, info-com tech will
show
a great dominance in 2040 with 15% it is
only
estimated to reach by 1% in
next
20 years. An area to look out for is going to be agriculture since it will decrease from 4% in 2040 to 1% in 2060
on the contrary
Materials would
merely
be increasing by a percent. Last
but
not the least energy is going to acquire 7% in 2040 of which will then fall by 2% in 2060.
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IELTS academic The pie chart provides information on estimations of six various sectors globally between the period 2040 to 2060.

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