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The chart below shows the estimated literature by region and gender for 2009-2014.

The chart below shows the estimated literature by region and gender for 2009-2014. paQ03
The below information illustrated the figure of scholarly rates by nation and gender for 2009-2014. To begin with, a world has a total of 82. 2 propositions between 2009-2014 as male was 87. 2 and female was 77. 3 tariffs. However, on the next of Africa has a 19. 7 decline and male and female probability was drop tiny fraction amount of it. Nevertheless, American was a leading part of the publications from above and making entities rise to compare to Africa. Along with Asia has a total literacy ratio was of 79. 3 as the male and female proposition was differences had a tiny fraction. Europe was a leading aspect for Academic in several parts of the country and the highest percentage points compared to others all-region. And also male and female frequency ratio higher than other. The last country was Oceania had a second spot for literacy. To sum up, Europe has the highest and Africa has the lowest educational probabilities by total and in male or female.
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of Africa has a 19. 7 decline and male and
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probability was drop tiny fraction amount of it.
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, American was a leading part of the publications from above and making entities rise to compare to Africa. Along with Asia has a total literacy ratio was of 79. 3 as the male and
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proposition was differences had a tiny fraction. Europe was a leading aspect for Academic in several parts of the country and the highest percentage points compared to others all-region. And
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frequency ratio higher than other. The last country was Oceania had a second spot for literacy.

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