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The pie chart provides information on career choice of anthropology graduates from same institute and breaks down the salaries by the sector after the five-year experience.

The pie chart provides information on career choice of anthropology graduates from same institute and breaks down the salaries by the sector after the five-year experience. E33XQ
The pie chart provides information on career choice of anthropology graduates from same institute and breaks down the salaries by the sector after the five-year experience. Overall, highest number of graduates opted for a full-time job. In regard to the Salary split after five years of experience, Private sector employed more graduates on the payscale below $75, 000, however, higher number of graduates earned above $75, 000 in the Government and Freelance jobs. Five percent of graduates in Freelance and Government sector each and 10% in private earned between $25, 000–49, 999. 15% of independent and govt departments workers were employed at $50, 000-74, 999 range each, Whereas the ratio of employees was 20% higher in Private companies. 40% independent jobholders, 30% government jobholders, and 25% private job holders were earning between $75, 000-99, 999. The highest number of Government employees earned above $100, 000 at 50% with freelancers at 40%, and Private job holders at 30%. In regard to Profession after graduation, the three choices that dominated the chart were full-time job at 53%, Part-time work at 15%, and unemployment at 12%. Around 8% of students chose the full-time postgraduate course and 5% stayed unemployed. The data for the remaining 7% remained unknown.
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opted for a full-time
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. In regard to the Salary split after five years of experience,
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Private
sector employed more
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on the
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below $75, 000,
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earned above $75, 000 in the
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Government
and Freelance jobs.

Five percent of
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in Freelance and
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sector each and 10% in
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earned between $25, 000–49, 999. 15% of independent and govt departments workers
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at $50, 000-74, 999 range each, Whereas the ratio of employees was 20% higher in
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Private
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. 40% independent jobholders, 30%
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jobholders, and 25%
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private
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holders were earning between $75, 000-99, 999. The highest number of
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Government
employees earned above $100, 000 at 50% with freelancers at 40%, and
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Private
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holders at 30%.

In regard to Profession after graduation, the three choices that dominated the chart were full-time
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at 53%, Part-time work at 15%, and unemployment at 12%. Around 8% of students chose the full-time postgraduate course and 5% stayed unemployed. The data for the remaining 7% remained unknown.
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IELTS academic The pie chart provides information on career choice of anthropology graduates from same institute and breaks down the salaries by the sector after the five-year experience.

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