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The diagram illustrates the way in which tomato ketchup is prepared.

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The diagram illustrates the way in which tomato ketchup is prepared. Overall, the process consists of two main stages, beginning with collection of potatoes and ending up with consumption of ketchup. First of all, tomatoes are collected and put in basket. Next, having been separated into good and bad ones, tomatoes are transported to the manufacturing plant. In the next stage, cleared from a stalk, seeds and skin, tomatoes are stacked in a container, where they are later smashed. Subsequently, sugar, vinegar and salt are mixed with tomato and undergo boiling process. After that, boiled tomato is left for two hours and then poured into bottles. Having been labeled, ketchup passes through a quality assurance. The next step involves boxing and distribution of ketchups to supermarkets. Finally, ultimate product can be consumed with hamburger and fries.
The diagram illustrates the way in which tomato ketchup
is prepared
.

Overall
, the process consists of two main stages, beginning with collection of potatoes and ending up with consumption of ketchup.

First of all
, tomatoes
are collected
and put in basket.
Next
, having
been separated
into
good
and
bad
ones, tomatoes
are transported
to the manufacturing plant.

In the
next
stage, cleared from a stalk, seeds and skin, tomatoes
are stacked
in a container, where they are later smashed.
Subsequently
, sugar, vinegar and salt
are mixed
with tomato and undergo boiling process. After that, boiled tomato is
left
for two hours and then poured into bottles. Having
been labeled
, ketchup passes through a quality assurance. The
next
step involves boxing and distribution of
ketchups
to supermarkets.

Finally
, ultimate product can
be consumed
with hamburger and fries.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the way in which tomato ketchup is prepared.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
136 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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