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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. NXkj
The diagrams illustrate how West Park Secondary School has developed since 1950 when it was built. In 1950, the school was a single building located along the main road and to the right of a series of houses. There was a large playground which was located right behind the school building to the right of some farmland. Thirty years later in 1980, the houses were demolished and replaced by a car park, as well as a new science block, for the school while the old school building was changed into its main building. The farmland was also replaced by a new sports field, but the playground remained unchanged. In the last year, 2010, the car park was extended, as a result of which the land previously allocated to the sports field was added to it. However, about a third of the old playground was turned into a new, yet much smaller, sports field. Overall, the school saw significant growth although its recreational facilities did not develop as much as its buildings and parking space.
The diagrams illustrate how West Park Secondary
School
has developed since 1950 when it
was built
.

In 1950, the
school
was a single
building
located along the main road and to the right of a series of
houses
. There was a large playground which
was located
right behind the
school
building
to the right of
some
farmland.

Thirty years later in 1980, the
houses
were demolished
and replaced by a car park,
as well
as a new science block, for the
school
while the
old
school
building
was
changed
into its main
building
. The farmland was
also
replaced by a new sports field,
but
the playground remained unchanged.

In the last year, 2010, the car park
was extended
,
as a result
of which the land previously allocated to the

sports
field was
added
to it.
However
, about a third of the
old
playground
was turned
into a new,
yet
much

smaller
, sports field.

Overall
, the
school
saw
significant growth although its recreational facilities did not develop as much as its

buildings
and parking space.
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