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The pie chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who were arrested from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart compares the main reasons that the different genders were arrested most recently.

The pie chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who were arrested from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart compares the main reasons that the different genders were arrested most recently. jRR1p
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who were arrested from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart compares the main reasons that the different genders were arrested most recently. It is evident from the charts that males were arrested more than females and that public drinking was the most common reason for arrest for both. To begin, the proportion of males arrested was much greater than for females. 32% were arrested compared to only 9% for women. Turning to the reasons for the most recent arrests, there were some clear differences between men and women. Men were twice as likely to be arrested for drink driving than women, at 26% and 14% respectively. Breach of order, theft, and other reasons were also slightly higher for men, with all these offences standing in the range of 12-18% for both sexes. Interestingly though, women experienced a higher percentage of arrest rates for assault and public drinking. The figures for assault were fairly similar at approximately 18%, whereas public drinking represented the main reason for arrest, with women at a massive 38%, compared to 31% for men. In a small percentage of cases, no answer was given.
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arrested
from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart compares the main
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reasons
that the
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different
genders were
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arrested
most recently. It is evident from the charts that males were
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arrested
more than females and that public drinking was the most common
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reason
for
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arrest
for both.

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begin
, the proportion of males
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arrested
was much greater than for females. 32% were
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arrested
compared to
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only
9% for
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women
. Turning to the
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reasons
for the most recent
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arrests
, there were
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some
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clear
differences between
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men
and
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women
.
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Men
were twice as likely to be
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arrested
for
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drink driving
than
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women
, at 26% and 14%
respectively
. Breach of order, theft, and other
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reasons
were
also
slightly
higher for
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men
, with all these
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offences
standing in the range of 12-18% for both sexes.
Interestingly
though,
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women
experienced a higher percentage of
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arrest
rates for assault and public drinking. The figures for assault were
fairly
similar at approximately 18%, whereas public drinking represented the main
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reason
for
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arrest
, with
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women
at a massive 38%, compared to 31% for
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men
. In a
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small
percentage of cases, no answer was
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given
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who were arrested from 1989 to 1994, while the bar chart compares the main reasons that the different genders were arrested most recently.

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198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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