Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant.

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. oRRLw
The graphs demonstrate some proposed advancements to structure of sports centre of university. Overall, the central building will remain almost unchanged, while two  outdoor courts will be demolished and some new facilities are planned to be introduced. The  central building will not be touched at all, but outdoor courts besides are proposed to be pulled down, so that the area of main building would be extended. One of the notable changes is going to be introduction of the leisure pool to the west of main building, and new changing rooms will be erected on the south-west and south-east corners of the sports centre.  Moreover, it is planned to contruct a new sports shop to the west and café to the east of reception. It is important to note that, the eastern outdoor court will be demolished to make a way for sports hall. Also, the east wall of gym will be destroyed to extend it by the dance studios to the east of sports hall.
The graphs demonstrate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
proposed advancements to structure of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
of university.
Overall
, the central
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
will remain almost unchanged, while two
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
outdoor courts will
be demolished
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
new facilities
are planned
to
be introduced
.

The
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
central
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
will not
be touched
at all,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
outdoor courts
besides
are proposed
to
be pulled
down,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the area of main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
would
be extended
. One of the notable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
is going to be introduction of the leisure
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
pool


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
to
the west of main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
, and new changing rooms will
be erected
on

the south-west and south-east corners of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
.  
Moreover
, it
is planned
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
contruct
a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
shop to the west and café to the east of reception. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to note that, the eastern outdoor court will
be demolished
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a way for

sports hall.
Also
, the east wall of gym will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
destroyed
to extend it by the dance studios to the east of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
hall.

IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant.