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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant.

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The graphs demonstrate some proposed advancements to structure of sports centre of university. Overall, the central building will remain almost unchanged, while two outdoor courts will be demolished and some new facilities are planned to be introduced. The central building will not be touched at all, but outdoor courts besides are proposed to be pulled down, so that the area of main building would be extended. One of the notable changes is going to be introduction of the leisure pool to the west of main building, and new changing rooms will be erected on the south-west and south-east corners of the sports centre. Moreover, it is planned to contruct a new sports shop to the west and café to the east of reception. It is important to note that, the eastern outdoor court will be demolished to make a way for sports hall. Also, the east wall of gym will be destroyed to extend it by the dance studios to the east of sports hall.

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