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The pie chart illustrates the most important factors which lead to worldwide land degradation, while the table shows the share of three areas around the world in this category during 1990.

The pie chart illustrates the most important factors which lead to worldwide land degradation, while the table shows the share of three areas around the world in this category during 1990. o263
The pie chart illustrates the most important factors which lead to worldwide land degradation, while the table shows the share of three areas around the world in this category during 1990. Overall, over-grazing has the highest amount of land degradation, and also Europe was responsible for the significant quantity of total land degradation among three regions. According to the pie chart, over-grazing contributes the largest share of land degradation, whereas both over-cultivation and deforestation are responsible for about one-third of total land degradation. The remaining 7% is accounted to a variety of other items. Furthermore, Europe had the highest percentage of total land degradation with 23%, which all three factors including deforestation, over-cultivation, and over-grazing had a considerable contribution. (9. 8%, 7. 7%, and 5. 5% respectively). Oceania ranked second with 13% which the most proportion was accounted by over-grazing with 11. 3% and over-cultivation did not have any share in this area. Finally, North America with 5% of total land degradation affected the world during 1990.
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the share of three areas around the world in this category during 1990.

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land
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among three regions.

According to the pie chart, over-grazing contributes the largest share of
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land
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degradation
, whereas both over-cultivation and deforestation are responsible for about one-third of
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land
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. The remaining 7%
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Furthermore
, Europe had the highest percentage of
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land
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degradation
with 23%, which all three factors including deforestation, over-cultivation, and over-grazing had a considerable contribution. (9. 8%, 7. 7%, and 5. 5%
respectively
). Oceania ranked second with 13% which the most proportion
was accounted
by over-grazing with 11. 3% and over-cultivation did not have any share in this area.
Finally
, North America with 5% of
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates the most important factors which lead to worldwide land degradation, while the table shows the share of three areas around the world in this category during 1990.

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