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The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart indicates the various result of transport facilities is being used by people to travel to, in an European city among 1960, 1980 and 2000. Overall, when we take a look at the bar chart, we can see that, there are significant differences among the amount of transport facilities. Every years, the figures for transport had changed over the years. Bus had its most amount in 1980 with approximately 27 %, whereas car had its most figure in 2000 with around 42 %. On the other hand, both bole and foot had their most number of percentage in 1960. Other years modes of transport had a number of fluctuations. Bus had average figure for 2000 with about 17 %, whilst bike and foot had a small number with nearly 7 % and 9 % in 2000. Neverthless, the amount for transport facilities were almost on par with 22 %, 20 %, 17 % respectively.
The bar chart indicates the various result of
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facilities is being
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people
to travel to, in
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European city among 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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, when we take a look at the bar chart, we can
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see
that, there are significant differences among the amount of
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transport
facilities.

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, the figures for
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transport
had
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over the years. Bus had its most amount in 1980 with approximately 27 %, whereas car had its most figure in 2000 with around 42 %.
On the other hand
, both bole and foot had their most number of percentage in 1960. Other years modes of
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transport
had a number of fluctuations. Bus had average figure for 2000 with about 17 %, whilst bike and foot had a
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small
number with
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7 % and 9 % in 2000.
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Neverthless
, the amount for
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facilities were almost on par with 22 %, 20 %, 17 %
respectively
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IELTS academic The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

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