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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. QL8m9
The map illustrates the transformation that happens to Chorleywood village over the period from 1960 to 1994. Overall, it's clear that major development happened by the the expense of nature. The key takeaway from the figure is that in the period between 1868 to 1883 there were only two main roads. One of them was on the Western side of the village. Another one crossing from the North West to the North Eastside. The railway was built between the period of 1883 to 1922. Chorleywood station was built in the year 1909 which pass from the West to the East side of the village. The Center of the village occupied by Chorleywood Park and a golf course. Interestingly, gentrification happened between 1922 to 1970. Hence, the motorway was built in the year 1970. this motorway passed the main road from the North East to the South East of the railway. By the year 1994, most of the people settled both sides of motorways for the convenience of transport facilities.
The map illustrates the transformation that happens to
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Chorleywood
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village
over the period from 1960 to 1994.
Overall
, it's
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clear
that major development happened by
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expense of nature. The key takeaway from the figure is that in the period
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there were
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only
two main roads. One of them was on the Western side of the
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village
. Another one crossing from the North West to the North Eastside. The railway
was built
between the period of 1883 to 1922.
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Chorleywood
station
was built
in the year 1909 which pass from the West to the East side of the
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village
. The Center of the
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village
occupied by
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Chorleywood
Park and a golf course.
Interestingly
, gentrification happened
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between 1922 to 1970
.
Hence
, the motorway
was built
in the year 1970.
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this
motorway passed the main road from the North East to the South East of the railway. By the year 1994, most of the
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people
settled both sides of motorways for the convenience of transport facilities.
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IELTS academic Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

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