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According to the graph the percentage of part-time laborer's are analyzed in four countries by two different years.

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According to the graph the percentage of part-time laborer's are analyzed in four countries by two different years. This can allow us to understand the level of percentage of part time workforce in these four countries. Listing the top is the Country Wales by the value of figures given in the graph, Wales have the highest number of Workforce in 1980 which is increased by the year of 2010 with 35%. Next in line is the country England which is also increased by 5% by the year 2010 comparatively with the year 1980 by 25%. But, in the lower end comes the North Ireland and Scotland with the least number of part-time laborers. The Graph indicates that the number of labors in the Northern Irelands have comparatively fallen by the year 2010. Whereas, the rest of the countries have risen by at least 2% - 5% which means that Northern Irelands is the least growing country in terms of employment for part timers.

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