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The pie chart illustrate the average percentage of Sodium , Saturated fat and added sugar in typical meals and is it unhealty if eaten too much.

The pie chart illustrate the average percentage of Sodium, Saturated fat and added sugar in typical meals and is it unhealty if eaten too much. D2p6p
Overall, as pie chart shows the three type of nutrients i. e Sodium, Saturated fat and added sugar in the meal and at what propotion they are cunsmed by the people in USA. Sodium and Saturated fat are genrally taken in dinner where as added sugar is mostly taken in snacks. Turning to first chart, it shows the propotion of sodium intake in meal as the first pie chart shows the socium is consumed by the people in USA is mostly at night during their dinner time and it's 43% of sodium in typical meals consumed people in USA. Seconf pie graph illustrates the Saturated fat percentage consumed by the people in USA. As the graph shows that 37% of saturated fat is taken at night while having dinner and % which is the minimum saturated fat consumed during breakfast. Turning to the final one, as the pie chart shows the percentage of Added sugar so it can be observed that% of there snack have Added sugar in it and which is the most consumption of Added sugar by people in USA and the least intake of added sugar is during breakfast time. It have the most consumption of added sugar during snacks.
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the three type of nutrients i. e Sodium,
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Saturated
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fat
and
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in the meal and at what
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propotion
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cunsmed
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people
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in USA
. Sodium and
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fat
are
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genrally
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in USA
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in USA
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that 37% of
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is taken
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in USA
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is during breakfast time. It
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during snacks.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrate the average percentage of Sodium, Saturated fat and added sugar in typical meals and is it unhealty if eaten too much.

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