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the maps below show an island before and after the costruction

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The maps depict the evolution of an island over a period of time. Overall, the island witnessed an ashtonishing change over the years. At the beginning it was inhabitated and it seems to be wild. Then, it was an increase in buildings to host visitors, time by time. As it is clear, the perimeter that housed numerous facilities has been extended more than 600 metres. In the core of the island, a reception has been built. In addition, it was sourranded by a vehicle track, leading to two directions running across the center: one leading to the upside where there is a restaurant (built on the coast). Whereas, the other line leads to a jetty that has been set up downside. The vehicle track is linked to a platform that runs through numerous accomodations that are placed on the left side of the figure. Moreover, following the way, a natural beach has reached where people can swim in the open sea. On the right side of the map, a compound of apartments has been constructed, connected each other by a circular footpath.
The maps depict the evolution of an island over a period of time.

Overall
, the island witnessed an
ashtonishing
change
over the years. At the beginning it was
inhabitated
and it seems to be wild. Then, it was an increase in buildings to host visitors, time by time.

As it is
clear
, the perimeter that housed numerous facilities has
been extended
more than 600
metres
. In the core of the island, a reception has
been built
.
In addition
, it was
sourranded
by a vehicle
track
, leading to two directions running across the center: one leading to the upside where there is a restaurant (built on the coast).
Whereas
, the other line leads to a jetty that has
been set
up downside.

The vehicle
track
is linked
to a platform that runs through numerous
accomodations
that
are placed
on the
left
side of the figure.
Moreover
, following the way, a natural beach has reached where
people
can swim in the open sea.

On the right side of the map, a compound of apartments has
been constructed
, connected each other by a circular footpath.
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