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comparison between members and non-members of a book club for the period of February 2000

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The table compares the total sales of the three different books purchased by members and non-members of a book club for the period of February 2000. Overall, it can be seen that while the magazine surpassed the total sales among the other two publications, fiction constituted the bottom of all books. In detail, for non-book club members, 1249 magazines were purchased by the college students, which comprised the highest net, as opposed to fiction at only 31. Interestingly, college staff showed similar interest in the same set of books in which magazine was the most popular acquiring 332 sales, while fiction was the least popular with 44 sales. On the contrary, public members were showing a different set of book preference, wherein sales for nonfiction has the highest ner, compared to fiction, entirely nil. On the other hand, for book club members, nonfiction publications were number one with 942 sales, far higher than the counterparts. Although the magazine was surprisingly the most favorite among non-club members, book club members made the most trivial choice at only 33.
The table compares the total
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of the three
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by
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and non-members of a
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book
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for the period of February 2000.
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, it can be
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that while the
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surpassed the total
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among the other two publications,
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fiction
constituted the bottom of all books.

In detail, for non-book
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, 1249
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magazines
were
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by the college students, which comprised the highest net, as opposed to
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at
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31.
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, college staff
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showed
similar interest in the same set of
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in which
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was the most popular acquiring 332
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, while
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was the least popular with 44
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.
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, public
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were showing a
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set of
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preference, wherein
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for nonfiction has the highest
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, compared to
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,
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nil.

On the other hand
, for
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, nonfiction publications were number one with 942
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, far higher than the counterparts. Although the
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was
surprisingly
the most favorite among non-club
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,
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made the most trivial choice at
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33.

IELTS academic comparison between members and non-members of a book club for the period of February 2000

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