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The given Bar chart gives information about daily internet uses of UK people in four different year And different age group

The given Bar chart gives information about daily internet uses of UK people in four different year And different age group N8eQ0

The given infographic representation, in the form of bar graph, reveals the proportion of people belongs to different age ranges in the UK who utilized the net every day between 2003 and 2006. During 2003, four-fifth people of age from 16 to 24 used internet every day, which leveled off in 2004. Since 2005, utilization of net for a daily purpose has substantially raised with 100%, in the proportion around 90% in 2006. However, need of net by the people of age between 25 and 44 was nearly half in initial year but this percentage through constantly till 2006. Similar trend can be seen in the age group of 45 to 54, that more than half population of this age group was using net daily but in the last year it reached to the peak by 80%. In contrary, it can be observed that people had not use much internet for daily purpose who aged between 55 and 64 with more than a quarter during 2003 to 2005, and around half in the year 2006. Now people who had age above 65 not use the net in the year 2003, but one fifth of the population used net from 2004 to 2006. Overall, in starting year the use of net was less but after word it grew up among all age groups.

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