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This map presents some challenges because there aren’t a ton of changes and the overview is a little bit tricky.

This map presents some challenges because there aren’t a ton of changes and the overview is a little bit tricky. 7WBKk

The given maps depict how the transit accessibility of a city hospital has altered from 2007 to 2010. Overall, the three-year period saw changes to the to the road layout. The salient features of this alteration are the addition of two roundabouts, public parking facilities and a bus station. According to the map of 2010, access to the city hospital were still via the same roads, namely City Road, Hospital Road and Ring Road; however, by 2010, two roundabouts had been built at the junctions shown in the map of 2007, which necessitated the removal of bus stops located on the both sides of Hospital Road. As a result of the demolition of those bus stops, a bus station was erected on the west-side of Hospital Road, with access to this being through (the)both roundabouts. The further additional feature is the car park on the right-hand of the Hospital Road, which was for both public and the city hospital’s workforce, was separated into two different car parks for each of them, with the one for public being moved to the right of the city hospital, and with the other one remained in the same place.

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 maps depict how the transit accessibility of a city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 has altered from 2007 to 2010.

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saw
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changes
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to the to the
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road
 layout. The salient features of this alteration are the addition of two roundabouts, public parking facilities and a bus station.

According to the map of 2010, access to the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 were still
 via the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
, namely
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Road
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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Road
 and Ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
; however
, by 2010, two roundabouts had been built
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stops
 located on the both sides of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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Road
. As a result
 of the demolition of those bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
, a bus station was erected
 on the west-side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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Road
, with access to this being through (the)both roundabouts.

The further
 additional feature is the car park on the right-hand of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
, which was for both public and the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital’s
 workforce, was separated
 into two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 car parks for each of them, with the one for public being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the right of the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, and with the other one remained in the same place. 