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The maps illustrate the settlement of Woodland in 1980 and 2010 revealing what have changed and what has remained same

The maps illustrate the settlement of Woodland in 1980 and 2010 revealing what have changed and what has remained same J33mB
The maps illustrate the settlement of Woodland in 1980 and 2010 revealing what have changed and what has remained same. Overall, the Woodland witnessed dramatic changes and was completely modernized into residential area during the time period; however, East bank appears to have been left undeveloped. Originally, there were nothing; nonetheless, it was converted into retirement village. The most noticeable addition was that the retirement village with the road was built in among the Woodland. Another major changes were that restaurant and hotel were replaced by demolishing Tea room and sand dunes which were in the seaside. Additionally, golf course, which were nothing before, was added in the north side of permanent houses. However, the East bank has remained as unchanged without touched.
The maps illustrate the settlement of Woodland in 1980 and 2010 revealing what have
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changed
and what has remained same.
Overall
, the Woodland witnessed dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
and was completely modernized into residential area during the time period;
however
, East bank appears to have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
undeveloped.
Originally
, there were nothing; nonetheless, it
was converted
into retirement village. The most noticeable addition was that the retirement village with the road
was built
in among the Woodland. Another major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
were that restaurant and hotel
were replaced
by demolishing Tea room and sand dunes which were in the seaside.
Additionally
, golf course, which were nothing
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before
, was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
in the north side of permanent
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houses
.

However
, the East bank has remained as unchanged without touched.
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IELTS academic The maps illustrate the settlement of Woodland in 1980 and 2010 revealing what have changed and what has remained same

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