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Abdulmelik arslan ielts academic tas-1

Abdulmelik arslan ielts academic tas-1 N332b
The table illustrates the percentage of national consumer expenditure by category in five different countries in the year 2000. Overall, European countries which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey had the highest percantage of spending on food, drinks, tobacco among these three category. While the percentage of leisure, education was the lowest category. In category of food, drinks, tobacco, Turkey was the highest rate which was 32, 14%. In contrast the lowest expenditure was made by Sweden, which rate was 15, 77 which was lower than twofold Turkey's rate. Ireland's rate was 28, 91%, the percentage was the closest rate to Turkey. Spain and Italy's rate were at 18, 80% and 16, 36% respectively. Clothing, footwear which comprised almost one-tenth of Italy's rate. Turkey, Spain and Ireland's percentages between 6 and 7. Sweden's rate at 5, 40%. All countries' the lowest percentage of expenditure on leisure, education. Turkey's expenditure rate was 4, 35% which was the highest rate in that category. Sweden and Italy's rate were nearly same 3, 22% and 3, 20% respectively. Ireland's spending rate at 2, 21% on leisure, education and the lowest rate at 1, 98% with Spain.
The table illustrates the
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of national consumer
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by
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different
countries in the year 2000.

Overall
, European countries which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey had the highest
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percantage
of spending on food, drinks, tobacco among these three
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category
. While the
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percentage
of leisure, education was the
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lowest
category.

In
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of food, drinks, tobacco, Turkey was the highest
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which was 32, 14%. In
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contrast
the
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lowest
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was made
by Sweden, which
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was 15, 77 which was lower than twofold Turkey's
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. Ireland's
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was 28, 91%, the
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was the closest
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to Turkey. Spain and Italy's
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were at 18, 80% and 16, 36%
respectively
.

Clothing, footwear which comprised almost one-tenth of Italy's
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. Turkey, Spain and Ireland's
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between 6 and 7. Sweden's
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at 5, 40%.

All countries' the
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of
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on leisure, education. Turkey's
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was 4, 35% which was the highest
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in that
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. Sweden and Italy's
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were
nearly
same 3, 22% and 3, 20%
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. Ireland's spending
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at 2, 21% on leisure, education and the
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lowest
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at 1, 98% with Spain.
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IELTS academic Abdulmelik arslan ielts academic tas-1

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