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İelts task-1 practise abdulmelik arslan

İelts task-1 practise abdulmelik arslan m88PK
The bar chart provides information about carbon emission from three fossil fuels in the UK between 1990 to 2010. Overall, the source of gas experienced an upward trend, while oil and coal showed a downward trend theoughout the given period. Just oil had some fluctuations among three sources. In 1990, the gas were the lowest emission source, with just above 200 million tons. Gas output showed a steadily rose until end of the given period, however, the gas became the highest source of greenhouse, which was approximately 320 million tons. The oil experinced a surge trend, which rate of emission about 270 million tons, and ıt declined to just under 250 milliom tons in 1995 and then the oil showed a slightly rise to just above 250 million tons. After 2000, the oil fell steadily until 2010 and the rate of oil source was about 210 million tons. The highest source of emission was coal in 1990 and it percentage of coal source was just above 300 million tons and the the coal showed a steadily downward trend by 2010. Meanwhile coal became the lowest variety of greenhouse which made up approxinately 180 million tons.
The bar chart provides information about carbon
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emission
from three fossil fuels in the UK
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1990 and 2010".
between 1990 to 2010
.
Overall
, the
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source
of
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gas
experienced an upward
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trend
, while
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oil
and coal
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showed
a downward
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trend
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theoughout
the
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given
period.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
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oil
had
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some
fluctuations among three
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sources
. In 1990, the
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gas
were the lowest
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emission
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source
, with
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just
above 200
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million
tons.
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Gas
output
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showed
a
You used an adverb ('steadily') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('rose') instead of another adjective.
steadily rose
until
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end
of the
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given
period,
however
, the
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gas
became the highest
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source
of greenhouse, which was approximately 320
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million
tons. The
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oil
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experinced
a surge
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trend
, which rate of
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emission
about 270
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million
tons, and
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ıt
declined to
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just
under 250
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milliom
tons in 1995 and then the
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oil
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showed
a
You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('rise') instead of another adjective.
slightly rise
to
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just
above 250
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million
tons. After 2000, the
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oil
fell
steadily
until 2010 and the rate of
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oil
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source
was about 210
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million
tons. The highest
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source
of
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emission
was coal in 1990 and
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'it'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
it percentage
of coal
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source
was
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just
above 300
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million
tons and
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.
the the
coal
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showed
a
steadily
downward
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trend
by 2010.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Meanwhile
coal became the lowest variety of greenhouse which made up
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approxinately
180
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million
tons.
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IELTS academic İelts task-1 practise abdulmelik arslan

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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