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The pie chart gives information about how waste management is done in three countries

The pie chart gives information about how waste management is done in three countries 6mYV3
The chart above gives information regarding how the management of harmful waste is done by using various style in three various countries. We can see that the region mentioned using distinct proportions of different course to tackle the waste problem. Regarding the recycling form, the Republic of Korea recycles waste more than the other two land, around 69 percent while, Sweden recycles waste just 25% of all the share. Looking at the United Kingdom figure, the provincial does not opt for the recycling process. However, United Kingdom has introduced two course which other society does not include, first is Chemical treatment and Dumping at sea, having a similar application of 8%. Talking about underground techniques, United Kingdom accounted for more use of underground process as compared to other nations, total 82%%. Whereas, the Republic of Korea as well as Sweden possess a total figure of 22% and 55%, respectively. Observing data given in the chart, it can clearly be seen, incineration or destroy waste by fire system used by three provinces have much less scale out of total numbers, Sweden acquires 20%, the Republic of Korea minimize waste by this habit only 9% of the time, United Kingdom merely have this process in use, only 2%. To summarize, Every nation using various form with various proportions to control generation as well as decomposition of hazardous waste which can cause numerous environmental issues.
The chart above gives information regarding how the management of harmful
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that the region mentioned using distinct proportions of
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problem. Regarding the recycling form, the Republic of Korea recycles
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more than the other two land, around 69 percent while, Sweden recycles
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25% of all the share. Looking at the
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Kingdom figure, the provincial does not opt for the recycling process.
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,
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Kingdom has introduced two course which other society does not include,
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is Chemical treatment and Dumping at sea, having a similar application of 8%.

Talking about underground techniques,
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Kingdom accounted for more
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of underground process as compared to other nations, total 82%%. Whereas, the Republic of Korea
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by fire system
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by three provinces have much less scale out of total numbers, Sweden acquires 20%, the Republic of Korea minimize
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To summarize
, Every nation using
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form with
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proportions to control generation
as well
as decomposition of hazardous
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waste
which can cause numerous environmental issues.
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