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Table analysis of the fast food eaten in Melbourne

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The table in analysis demonstrates the five major types of fast food eaten in Melbourne along time. Overall, it is possible to say that hamburguer and fried chicken are the most present fast food in terms of consuption. The salad pointed a increase tendency and, on the other hand, fired rice and noodles are the less eaten and indicate a constant level during time. For a more detailed analysis, fast food, in genereal, is projected to be eaten more, like the hamburguer, whose consuption is, nowadays, 38 units and is calculated to grow up to 51 units. Hamburger indicates an unstable scenario, given that, in 2005 the population consumed 40 units, today the quantity is 38 and in 2025 the expectation would be to achieve 51 units, in a way it decreased first and increased later. On the other hand, Fried Chicken shows a clear growth tendency, starting with 35 units and finishing in 45 units in 2025. Nevertheless, Salad pointed for an exponencial growth, since it started with 5 units in 2005 and is calculated to represent 41 units in 2025, which will create a big distance between it and the other two bottom foods in the table.
The table in analysis demonstrates the five major types of
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hamburguer
and fried chicken are the most present
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consuption
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increase tendency and,
on the other hand
, fired rice and noodles are the less eaten and indicate a constant level during time.

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hamburguer
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consuption
is, nowadays, 38
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. Hamburger indicates an unstable scenario,
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the quantity is 38 and in 2025 the expectation would be to achieve 51
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, in a way it decreased
first
and increased later.
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, Fried Chicken
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growth tendency, starting with 35
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and finishing in 45
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IELTS academic Table analysis of the fast food eaten in Melbourne

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3 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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