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The chart below shows information on three different groups of leisure activities in a British town. The results show the percentage of people who attended each type of event and also their level of educational achievement. Summarise the information by selecting, reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information on three different groups of leisure activities in a British town. The results show the percentage of people who attended each type of event and also their level of educational achievement. 96dM7
The supplied chart gives data on the percentage of the population in a British town split into 3 groups by the level of education, which are participating at social events such as concerts, cinemas and sport activities. In general, the attendance rate at certain social events increased among secondary education until age 16, 18 and university-level education. In the arts category, the percentage of participation among secondary education until age 16 is barely at 40% while in the cinema category, it has shot up at 60%. In the sports category, the attendance rate among the population under 16 has dropped significantly at 25%. Among the population until the age of 18, in the arts category, the percentage of people taking part in such activities is at 58%, while in the cinema it has increased up to 63%. Sports has the lowest percentage among the under 18 population, declining at 43%. Amid the university-level education, the percentage of the population participating in the arts category is at 63%, whilst in the cinema category, it has reached a peak of 65%. The sports category has the lowest attendance rate amid university-level education, having a 42% rate.
The supplied chart gives data on the
percentage
of the
population
in a British town split into 3 groups by the level of
education
, which are participating at social
events
such as concerts,
cinemas
and
sport
activities.

In general
, the attendance
rate
at certain social
events
increased among secondary
education
until age 16, 18 and university-level education.

In the
arts
category
, the
percentage
of participation among secondary
education
until age 16 is
barely
at 40% while in the
cinema
category
, it has shot up at 60%.
In
the
sports
category
, the attendance
rate
among the
population
under 16 has dropped
significantly
at 25%.

Among the
population
until the age of 18, in the
arts
category
, the
percentage
of
people
taking part in such activities is at 58%, while in the
cinema
it has increased up to 63%.
Sports has
the lowest
percentage
among the under 18
population
, declining at 43%.

Amid the university-level
education
, the
percentage
of the
population
participating in the
arts
category
is at 63%, whilst in the
cinema
category
, it has reached a peak of 65%. The
sports
category
has the lowest attendance
rate
amid university-level
education
, having a 42%
rate
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information on three different groups of leisure activities in a British town. The results show the percentage of people who attended each type of event and also their level of educational achievement.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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