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The pie chart displays the expenses of families in this particular region in 1950 and 2010.

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The pie chart displays the expenses of families in this particular region in 1950 and 2010. In 1950 the largest proportion of expenditures was housing, it took over the half of all spendings. Within sixty years its amount has decreased by fifty percent. In 2010 foods took the first place, it increased by approximately twenty percent. In 1950 lodging reached its highest level of seventy two percent. On the second place, THERE was foodstuff at the point of eleven percent, which is a low result compared to sixty years later. Other activities were less than ten percent. Education was about seven percent. Transportation, health care and other expenses were three, two and four percent respectively. As for 2010, food costs were thirty four percent, which is the biggest expenditure. Dwelling and other activities, which has grown by fifteen percent, were nineteen and twenty two percent respectively. Vehicle percentage increased from three percent to fourteen. Studying remained at about the same level of six percent. Medical aid rose only by two percent.
The pie chart displays the expenses of families in this particular region in 1950 and 2010.

In 1950 the largest proportion of expenditures was housing, it took over the half of all
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. Within sixty years its amount has decreased by fifty
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. In 2010 foods took the
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place, it increased by approximately twenty percent.

In 1950 lodging reached its highest level of
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seventy two
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. On the second place, THERE was foodstuff at the point of eleven
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, which is a low result compared to sixty years later. Other activities were less than ten
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. Education was about seven
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. Transportation, health care and other expenses were three, two and four
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respectively
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As for 2010, food costs were
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thirty four
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, which is the biggest expenditure. Dwelling and other activities, which has grown by fifteen
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, were nineteen and
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twenty two
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respectively
. Vehicle percentage increased from three
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to fourteen. Studying remained at about the same level of six
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. Medical aid rose
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