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Hi guys, Im Tam Im a international student coming to Bangkok, Thailand. I have lived in VN for naerly 1 year, I love it so much. Y know I hook on VNese food like Pho Banh My so in my freetime I always eat it with my mate. Now i will take you see my city. Bangkok is the capital of Thailand, it is realy exciting and dynamic. Come to Banghkok, you will be overcome by a wonderful mix of ancient and modern cultures. This is the architecture of the Grand Palace which is the most popular sightseeing attraction in Bangkok, or the Chao Phraya River which runs through the city, is conected by several canals. Besides there are a lot of traditional festivals, the most famous fes is the water slapping festival, also known as Songkran. Many people called Bangkok the food capital of Asia. This city has many wonderful restaurants and it is renowned for its street food stalls that make a variety of tasty dishes. No Thailand trip is complete unless visitors have experienced Bangkok’s vibrant nightlife. The city really comes alive in the evening and there are many venues to enjoy. Travelers are guaranteed they will experience a trip that will be not only interesting and fun, but also very memorable.
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called Bangkok the food capital of Asia. This city has
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wonderful restaurants and it
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IELTS academic Introduce Your country you love

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2 paragraphs
215 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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