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The given map illustrates the information about a typical American office and Japanese office

The given map illustrates the information about a typical American office and Japanese office kWDK8

The given map shows the information about typical American office and Japanese officeOverall it can be seen that American employees follows the tree structured approach in their office where as the Japanese employee do work in their office of the different way there are few similarity between Japanese office and American officeTo begin with there are two section manager in Japanese office and American office. In the Japanese office employee works in front of section manager where as employees work in their personal cabin in the American office. There are few things similar in the map such as department manager and section manager. Probing further there is fun printer copper storage to conference room in the American office where as there is no any separate room in the Japanese office there is one hall in the Japanese office where all the employee work in the Japanese office. It has only one window beside the department manager while there are two windows available in the right and left side in the American office.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the information about typical American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 and Japanese Possible spelling mistake found.
officeOverall
 it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
 follows the tree structured approach in their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 the Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
 do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 way there are Possible agreement error. The noun similarity seems to be countable; consider using: "few similarities".few similarities
few similarity
 between Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 and American Possible spelling mistake found.officeofficerofficersoffices
officeTo
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with there are two section Possible agreement error. Did you mean "managers"?managers
manager
 in Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 and American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. In the Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
 works in front of section You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorofficialsupervisorproducerexecutiveboss
manager
Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in their personal cabin in the American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. There are few things similar in the map such as department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorofficialsupervisorproducerexecutiveboss
manager
 and section You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorofficialsupervisorproducerexecutiveboss
manager
. Probing further
 there is fun printer copper storage to conference room in the American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 there is Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any separate room in the Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 there is one hall in the Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 where all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in the Japanese You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. It has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one window beside the department You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadministratorofficialsupervisorproducerexecutiveboss
manager
 while there are two windows available in the right and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side in the American You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. 