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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Given are line graph and table showing how average temperatures have changed during a-year period and annual hours of sunshine in three regions: London, New York and Sydney. The main feature is that as the warmest region during a year, Sydney showed the opposite trend to the rest two cities. Turning to the detail, between January and July, the temperature of Sydney declined steadily from around 26 to just over 15, while both London and New York showed rather remarkable increase of about 15 and 26 respectively. July onwards, the situation changed. The figure for Sydney rose to 25 in December, whereas the temperature of London went down to just below 10 and New York to 5 in December. As to the table, London was marked as the coldest area, showing 1, 180 hours a year. Both New York and Sydney on the other hand showed rather similar figures of 2535 and 2473 each.

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Given
 are line graph and table showing how average temperatures have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 during a-year period and annual hours of sunshine in three regions: London, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 York and Sydney. The main feature is that as the warmest region during a year, Sydney This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the opposite trend to the rest two cities.

Turning to the detail, between January and July, the temperature of Sydney declined steadily
 from around 26 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 15, while both London and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 York This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
rather
 remarkable increase of about 15 and 26 respectively
. July onwards, the situation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. The figure for Sydney rose to 25 in December, whereas the temperature of London went down to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below 10 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 York to 5 in December.

As to the table, London was marked
 as the coldest area, showing 1, 180 hours a year. Both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
New
 York and Sydney on the other hand
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
rather
 similar figures of 2535 and 2473 each. 