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The pie chart below shows the water distribution in 6 countries

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The given circular representation depicts the dispensation of water in six distinct Nations. The calibration of data is done in percentum. Overall, it is vivid that the maximum amount of water is utilised in case of agriculture juxtaposed 2 in industrial and domestic use. Whilst, the least amount of water is consumed in domestic use in all the Nations. Looking into the details of given Pie Charts it can be scrutinised that nearly half of the water is used for industrial purpose in North America and Europe. Whereas, only 10% of water is used in South America for industry. After that, less than one fifth of water is used for domestic purpose in North America, South America and Europe. Moving further, it can be noticed that 88% of water is consumed in agriculture by Central Asia, which is 4% and 7% more than utilisation in Africa and South East Asia respectively. Afterwards, almost similar amount of water is used for domestication in these three Nations. Moreover, only 7%, 5% and 12% is consumed for industrial use in Africa Central Asia and South East Asia respectively.
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in
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percentum
.

Overall
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in all the Nations.

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Pie Charts it can be
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for industrial purpose in North America and Europe. Whereas,
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10% of
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is
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in South America for industry. After that, less than one fifth of
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is
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used
for domestic purpose in North America, South America and Europe.

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further
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in agriculture by Central Asia, which is 4% and 7% more than
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in Africa and South East Asia
respectively
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used
for domestication in these three Nations.
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in Africa Central Asia and South East Asia
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