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The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017. kVQn
The two pie charts provide information about the expenditure on ads by different kinds of media in India between the years 2012 and 2017. Overall, the trend observed was that television media spent the most over the given time period while radio, digital and outdoor media collectively comprise the least expenditure. Television media comprised of exactly 43% of the total expenditure followed by print media at 38% in the year 2012. By 2017, there was a slight increase of 2% in the money spent by television media. In contrast, Print media experienced a significant decrease by 8%. Digital media made up a short percentage of 6% in 2012 which increased significantly to 15% while radio media which spent 7% in 2012 declined to 4% in 2017. However, outdoor media maintained a constant expenditure throughout the given time period. The expenditure remained at exactly 5% from the start year 2012 to the end year 2017.
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in India between the years 2012 and 2017.

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, the trend observed was that television
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spent the most over the
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time period while radio, digital and outdoor
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collectively
comprise the least expenditure.

Television
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comprised of exactly 43% of the total
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followed by print
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at 38% in the
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2012. By 2017, there was a slight increase of 2% in the money spent by television
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.
In contrast
, Print
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experienced a significant decrease by 8%.

Digital
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made up a short percentage of 6% in 2012 which increased
significantly
to 15% while radio
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which spent 7% in 2012 declined to 4% in 2017.

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, outdoor
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maintained a constant
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throughout the
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time period. The
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remained at exactly 5% from the
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start
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2012 to the
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2017.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017.

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