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The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar graph illustrates the statistics of world population in 4 countries f0r year 1950, 2002 and predictions for year 2050. The general trend observed is that India shows an increasing trend while China and Japan show a declining pattern in population. Overall, China has maintained the most population growth in the 1950 and 2002. However, population in India is anticipated to be the highest by 2050. The population growth of Indiia is projected to rise steadily from 15% in 1950 to around 20% by 2050. Japan and China both show a declining trend. The population of China and Japan are envisioned to drop at 15% and nearly 1% respectively. The population of USA is projected to fall moderately and then maintain a constant percentage of 5% by 2050.
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bar graph illustrates the statistics of world
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population
in 4 countries f0r year 1950, 2002 and predictions for year 2050.

The general trend observed is that India
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shows
an increasing trend while China and Japan
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show
a declining pattern in population.

Overall
, China has maintained the most
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population
growth in the 1950 and 2002.
However
,
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population
in India
is anticipated
to be the highest by 2050.

The
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population
growth of
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Indiia
is projected
to rise
steadily
from 15% in 1950 to around 20% by 2050.

Japan and China both
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show
a declining trend. The
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population
of China and Japan
are envisioned
to drop at 15% and
nearly
1%
respectively
.

The
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population
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of USA
is projected
to fall
moderately
and then maintain a constant percentage of 5% by 2050.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

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