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The pie chart below shows the contribution of various factors towards global warming. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the contribution of various factors towards global warming. 3bDQ5
The pie charts represent the expenditure on basic necessities in two different households. Overall, the pie chart of Household A shows highest expenditure on electricity and the least amount is spent on rent. Whereas, Household B shows an opposite trend, as it spends the highest amount on rent and the least on electricity. On one hand, Household A's expenditure is the most on electricity 34. 5% and spends least on rent 10. 9%. However, education comes a close second with 32. 7%, followed by groceries with 21. 8%. Electricity and education constitute about 67% of the total expenditure. On The other hand, Household B's spends excessively on rent 30. 5% and the least on electricity 19. 1%. However, groceries and education together comprise 50% of the total expenditure, as money spent on both is the same 25. 2%. Rent and electricity constitute the other 50% of total expenditure.
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30. 5% and the least on
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19. 1%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the contribution of various factors towards global warming.

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