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the pie chart below shows respectively the male and female ratio and the urban rural population ratio in a respect of a country.

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The pie chart depicts the male-female ratio as well as the proportion Urban and rural population in a country. The first pie chart indicates that the country has a lop-sided male and female ratio, while the second indicates that country is largely urbanised. In a country of 1, 027 million, almost three-fourth of the population, precisely 742 million, live in urban areas. Only one-fourth people, precisely 285 million, stay in rural areas. It can be discerned that the country's quiet urbanized. Perhaps, the country is largely industrial, with only a small portion of population engaged in agriculture of relative activity. On the parameter of gender ratio, the country fares rather poorly, as the distribution of population is skill in favour of males. There is only 933 female to every thousand males. This asymmetrical ratio gives a little about the poor status of the women in the society. On the whole, the Twin pie chart hint at a heavily populated, but industrialized country with a skewed sex ratio.
The pie chart depicts the male-female
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as well
as the proportion Urban and rural
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population
in a
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. The
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has a
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lop
-sided male and female
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ratio
, while the second indicates that
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is
largely
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urbanised
. In a
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of 1, 027 million, almost three-fourth of the
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,
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742 million,
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live
in urban areas.
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one-fourth
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people
,
precisely
285 million, stay in rural areas. It can
be discerned
that the country's quiet
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urbanized
. Perhaps, the
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is
largely
industrial, with
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engaged in agriculture of relative activity. On the parameter of gender
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, the
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fares
rather
poorly
, as the distribution of
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is
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in
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of males. There is
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933 female to every thousand males. This asymmetrical
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gives a
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about the poor status of the women in the society.

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populated,
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industrialized
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with a skewed sex
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IELTS academic the pie chart below shows respectively the male and female ratio and the urban rural population ratio in a respect of a country.

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