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The line graph gives the information about how products were transported in the UK (measured in millions of tonnes) by road, water, rail or pipeline from 1974 to 2002.

The line graph gives the information about how products were transported in the UK (measured in millions of tonnes) by road, water, rail or pipeline from 1974 to 2002. mbA6r
Overall, all the methods of transportation of products in the UK showed an upward trend throughout the period. Regarding the graph the greatest amount of usage of road was 70 million tonnes in 1974 and kept increasing reaching nearly 100 million tonnes in 2002. At the start of the period delivering products by water and railway were almost the same accounted for 40 million tonnes. However the railway system illustrated mainly downward trend constituting the minimum of 20 million tonnes, while water route proceeded to rise to 65 million tonnes. It is noticeable that pipeline convey had the lowest point compared with other ways. About 5 million of goods were carried by pipelines, reaching 20 million tonnes by the end of the period. Likewise, the road system of delivering goods was the most popular over the period.
Overall
, all the methods of transportation of products in the UK
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showed
an upward trend throughout the period.

Regarding the graph the greatest amount of usage of road was 70
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million
tonnes in 1974 and
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kept
increasing reaching
nearly
100
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million
tonnes in 2002. At the
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start
of the period delivering products by water and railway were almost the same accounted for 40
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million
tonnes.
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However
the railway system illustrated
mainly
downward trend constituting the minimum of 20
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million
tonnes, while water route proceeded to rise to 65
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million
tonnes. It is noticeable
The verb 'convey' is plural. Did you mean: "that pipeline conveys"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
that pipeline convey
had the lowest point compared with other ways. About 5
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million
of
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goods
were carried
by pipelines, reaching 20
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million
tonnes by the
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end
of the period.
Likewise
, the road system of delivering
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goods
was the most popular over the period.
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IELTS academic The line graph gives the information about how products were transported in the UK (measured in millions of tonnes) by road, water, rail or pipeline from 1974 to 2002.

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