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The two maps showes the changes at Grange Park ove one hundred year. we can see today thus park is expanded and designed by moderinity and new facilites. In the past in the middle of park was a fountain that is demolised and replaced by a rosa garden by four seats for each side. While thw 2 oldentrance had bee remaid, anothet entrance that is underground car park is reconstrycted. The stage for musicainas is rewnewed by Amphitcatre for concerts that is the same place, ponf for water moved to the bottom right side corner of the map wherad thr old side of pond is knoked down. in addidion it reconstruced by childten playareas. It is obviosly thar new facilitied are added and it would be more perfomance.
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one hundred year.
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IELTS academic Jddbbx jnd shjs kldvbdpna jsgbs hdhgs hsb ehvdbusl djbd s bd hs shbsbdbs

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128 words
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