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COFFEE AND TES BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS

COFFEE AND TES BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS 5bl9e
THE BAR GRAPH REPRESENTS THE DATA COLLECTED IN A SURVEY ABOUT THE COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN THE LAST FOUR WEEKS IN FIVE DIFFERENT CITIES IN AUSTRALIA WHICH ARE SYDNEY, MELBOURNE, BRISBANE, ADELAIDE AND HOBART. THE FIGURES ARE GIVEN IN PERCENTAGE. IT IS CAN BE SEEN THE REMARKABLE RATIO IS GOING TO THE CAFE TO BUY COFFEE OR TEA BY THE HIGHEST FIGURES IS 63 PERCENT IN MELBOURNE AND HOBART FOLLOW BY, SYDNEY, BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE WHICH ARE 61, 56 AND 49 PERCENT RESPECTIVELY. TO BEGIN WITH, THE PURCHASING OF INSTANT COFFEE THAT HAS MODERATE POPULARITY IN ALMOST CITIES BY THE GREATEST NUMBER IS 54 PERCENT IN HOBART AND OTHER CITIES HAVE THE SIMILAR TREND WHICH ARE 52 PERCENT IN BRISBANE, 50 PERCENT IN ADELAIDE AND JUST UNDER HALF IN SYDNEY AND MELBOURNE. THE PROPORTION THAT NOTICEABLE LESS THAN OTHER SECTORS IS THE PURCHASING OF FRESH COFFEE BY THE CITY HAS THE HIGHEST SPENDING IS SYDNEY AT NEARLY HALF THAT RATIO MORE THAN THE LOWEST SPENDING CITIES AT 10 PERCENT WHICH ARE 34 PERCENT IN BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE AND MELBOURNE AND HOBART OCCUPY THE PROPORTION AT 42 AND 38 PERCENT RESPECTIVELY. OVERALL, THE PROPORTION OF COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE CITIES OF AUSTRALIA ARE NOTICEABLY DIFFERENT. BY MORE THAN HALF OF THE POPULATION IN ALL CITIES EXCEPT ADELAIDE BUY COFFEE AND DRINKS FROM THE CAFE AND THE INFERIOR RATIO IS INSTANT COFFEE WHILE BUYING THE FRESH COFFEE IS SLIGHTLY POPULARITY.
THE BAR GRAPH REPRESENTS THE DATA COLLECTED IN A SURVEY ABOUT THE
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COFFEE
AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN THE LAST FOUR WEEKS IN FIVE
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DIFFERENT
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CITIES
IN AUSTRALIA WHICH ARE SYDNEY, MELBOURNE, BRISBANE, ADELAIDE AND HOBART. THE FIGURES ARE
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GIVEN
IN PERCENTAGE.

IT IS CAN BE
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SEEN
THE REMARKABLE RATIO IS GOING TO THE
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CAFE
TO
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BUY
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COFFEE
OR TEA BY THE HIGHEST FIGURES IS 63
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PERCENT
IN MELBOURNE AND HOBART FOLLOW BY, SYDNEY, BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE WHICH ARE 61, 56 AND 49
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PERCENT
RESPECTIVELY
.

TO
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BEGIN
WITH, THE PURCHASING OF INSTANT
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COFFEE
THAT HAS MODERATE POPULARITY IN ALMOST
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CITIES
BY THE GREATEST NUMBER IS 54
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PERCENT
IN HOBART AND OTHER
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CITIES
HAVE THE SIMILAR TREND WHICH ARE 52
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PERCENT
IN BRISBANE, 50
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PERCENT
IN ADELAIDE AND
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JUST
UNDER HALF IN SYDNEY AND MELBOURNE.

THE PROPORTION THAT NOTICEABLE LESS THAN OTHER SECTORS IS THE PURCHASING OF FRESH
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COFFEE
BY THE CITY HAS THE HIGHEST SPENDING IS SYDNEY AT
NEARLY
HALF THAT RATIO MORE THAN THE LOWEST SPENDING
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CITIES
AT 10
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PERCENT
WHICH ARE 34
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PERCENT
IN BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE AND MELBOURNE AND HOBART OCCUPY THE PROPORTION AT 42 AND 38
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PERCENT
RESPECTIVELY
.

OVERALL
, THE PROPORTION OF
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COFFEE
AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE
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CITIES
OF AUSTRALIA ARE
NOTICEABLY
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DIFFERENT
. BY MORE THAN HALF OF THE POPULATION IN ALL
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CITIES
EXCEPT ADELAIDE
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BUY
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COFFEE
AND DRINKS FROM THE
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CAFE
AND THE INFERIOR RATIO IS INSTANT
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COFFEE
WHILE BUYING THE FRESH
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COFFEE
IS
SLIGHTLY
POPULARITY.

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