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COFFEE AND TES BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS

COFFEE AND TES BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS 5bl9e

THE BAR GRAPH REPRESENTS THE DATA COLLECTED IN A SURVEY ABOUT THE COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN THE LAST FOUR WEEKS IN FIVE DIFFERENT CITIES IN AUSTRALIA WHICH ARE SYDNEY, MELBOURNE, BRISBANE, ADELAIDE AND HOBART. THE FIGURES ARE GIVEN IN PERCENTAGE. IT IS CAN BE SEEN THE REMARKABLE RATIO IS GOING TO THE CAFE TO BUY COFFEE OR TEA BY THE HIGHEST FIGURES IS 63 PERCENT IN MELBOURNE AND HOBART FOLLOW BY, SYDNEY, BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE WHICH ARE 61, 56 AND 49 PERCENT RESPECTIVELY. TO BEGIN WITH, THE PURCHASING OF INSTANT COFFEE THAT HAS MODERATE POPULARITY IN ALMOST CITIES BY THE GREATEST NUMBER IS 54 PERCENT IN HOBART AND OTHER CITIES HAVE THE SIMILAR TREND WHICH ARE 52 PERCENT IN BRISBANE, 50 PERCENT IN ADELAIDE AND JUST UNDER HALF IN SYDNEY AND MELBOURNE. THE PROPORTION THAT NOTICEABLE LESS THAN OTHER SECTORS IS THE PURCHASING OF FRESH COFFEE BY THE CITY HAS THE HIGHEST SPENDING IS SYDNEY AT NEARLY HALF THAT RATIO MORE THAN THE LOWEST SPENDING CITIES AT 10 PERCENT WHICH ARE 34 PERCENT IN BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE AND MELBOURNE AND HOBART OCCUPY THE PROPORTION AT 42 AND 38 PERCENT RESPECTIVELY. OVERALL, THE PROPORTION OF COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE CITIES OF AUSTRALIA ARE NOTICEABLY DIFFERENT. BY MORE THAN HALF OF THE POPULATION IN ALL CITIES EXCEPT ADELAIDE BUY COFFEE AND DRINKS FROM THE CAFE AND THE INFERIOR RATIO IS INSTANT COFFEE WHILE BUYING THE FRESH COFFEE IS SLIGHTLY POPULARITY.

THE BAR GRAPH REPRESENTS THE DATA COLLECTED IN A SURVEY ABOUT THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN THE LAST FOUR WEEKS IN FIVE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
DIFFERENT
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CITIES
 IN AUSTRALIA WHICH ARE SYDNEY, MELBOURNE, BRISBANE, ADELAIDE AND HOBART. THE FIGURES ARE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
GIVEN
 IN PERCENTAGE.

IT IS CAN BE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SEEN
 THE REMARKABLE RATIO IS GOING TO THE 'CAFE' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
CAFE
 TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
BUY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 OR TEA BY THE HIGHEST FIGURES IS 63 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
 IN MELBOURNE AND HOBART FOLLOW BY, SYDNEY, BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE WHICH ARE 61, 56 AND 49 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
RESPECTIVELY
.

TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
BEGIN
 WITH, THE PURCHASING OF INSTANT You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 THAT HAS MODERATE POPULARITY IN ALMOST You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
CITIES
 BY THE GREATEST NUMBER IS 54 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
 IN HOBART AND OTHER You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
CITIES
 HAVE THE SIMILAR TREND WHICH ARE 52 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
 IN BRISBANE, 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
 IN ADELAIDE AND This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
JUST
 UNDER HALF IN SYDNEY AND MELBOURNE.

THE PROPORTION THAT NOTICEABLE LESS THAN OTHER SECTORS IS THE PURCHASING OF FRESH You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 BY THE CITY HAS THE HIGHEST SPENDING IS SYDNEY AT NEARLY
 HALF THAT RATIO MORE THAN THE LOWEST SPENDING You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
CITIES
 AT 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
 WHICH ARE 34 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
 IN BRISBANE AND ADELAIDE AND MELBOURNE AND HOBART OCCUPY THE PROPORTION AT 42 AND 38 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
PERCENT
RESPECTIVELY
.

OVERALL
, THE PROPORTION OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
CITIES
 OF AUSTRALIA ARE NOTICEABLY
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
DIFFERENT
. BY MORE THAN HALF OF THE POPULATION IN ALL You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
CITIES
 EXCEPT ADELAIDE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
BUY
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 AND DRINKS FROM THE 'CAFE' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"Café
CAFE
 AND THE INFERIOR RATIO IS INSTANT You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 WHILE BUYING THE FRESH You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
COFFEE
 IS SLIGHTLY
 POPULARITY. 