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The bar chart shows the number of visitors in New York airport.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors in New York airport. rY3QJ
The chart indicates the amount of tourists utilizing the main three airpots in new york city from 1995 to 2000. In the laguardia airpot, the number of travellers in airpot around 35 millions in 1995. Afterthat, 1996 to 1999 the amount of tourists in the airpot suddenly increase by 40 millions to 50 millions. It is noticeably that almost 70 millions visitors seen in the 2000. The John F. Kennedy airpot travellers in the 1995 seen that 25 millions. In the 1996 to 1997 amount of visitors is increase gradually. Afterthat, 1998 to 1999 it could be suddenly decrease and visitors is increase on the airpot about 45 millions in 2000. Newark airport in the 1995 the people is around 15 millions. However, it can be increasingly in 1996 yo 1997 almost 40 millions. Afterthat, it could almost 41 miliions throughout last three years. Overall, the highest amount of people shown in the laguardia airport is around 70 millions in 2000; however, around 15 millions people seen on the newark airport in 1995 which is too much small amount of people.
The chart indicates the
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of tourists utilizing the main three
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airpots
in
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new york
city from 1995 to 2000.

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laguardia
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airpot
, the number of
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travellers
in
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airpot
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around
35
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millions
in 1995.
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Afterthat
, 1996 to 1999 the
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amount
of tourists in the
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airpot
suddenly
increase by 40
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millions
to 50
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millions
. It is
noticeably
that almost 70
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millions
visitors
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seen
in the 2000.

The John F. Kennedy
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airpot
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travellers
in the 1995
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seen
that 25
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millions
. In the 1996 to 1997
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amount
of visitors is increase
gradually
.
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Afterthat
, 1998 to 1999 it could be
suddenly
decrease and visitors is increase on the
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airpot
about 45
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millions
in 2000.

Newark airport in the 1995 the
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people
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is
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around
15
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millions
.
However
, it can be
increasingly
in 1996 yo 1997 almost 40
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millions
.
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Afterthat
, it could almost 41
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miliions
throughout last three years.

Overall
, the highest
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amount
of
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people
shown in the
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laguardia airport
is
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around
70
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millions
in 2000;
however
,
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around
15
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millions
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people
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seen
on the
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newark
airport in 1995 which is too much
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small
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