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the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Information about the ages of people in the countries of Yemen and Italy in years 2000 and a projection for 2050 is provided by the charts. On one side, in the year 2000, half of the population in Yemen was between 0 to 14 years old, and only a fewer than the other half (46. 3%) was between 15 to 59 years. Just a 3. 6% of the population was 60 years old or more. This situation changes in the prospect of year 2050, where more than half of the people would be 15 to 59 years old, reducing the number of the youngest. The elderly people would increase in a 2. 1%. On the other side, Italy in the year 2000 presented most of the population with 15 to 59 years old, and almost a quarter of them with 60 years old or more. The number of children and adolescents was the minor amount, with a 10% less than the elderly people. For the year 2050, elderly people and middle age people would be sharing the position with the highest amount of population, both with over the 40%. The youngest would have the least proportion of all, with only a 11. 5%. Overall, in Italy middle age and elderly people is prevalent for both years, whereas in Yemen the children, adolescents and middle age people are the ones with the highest percentages for the two years given.
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in the countries of Yemen and Italy in years 2000 and a projection for 2050
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by the charts.

On one side, in the
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year
2000, half of the
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population
in Yemen was
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between 0 to 14
years
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old
, and
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between 15 to 59
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population
was 60 years
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old
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changes
in the prospect of
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2050, where more than half of the
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would be 15 to 59 years
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old
, reducing the number of the youngest. The
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elderly
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people
would increase in a 2. 1%.

On the other side, Italy in the
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2000 presented most of the
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population
with 15 to 59 years
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old
, and almost a quarter of them with 60 years
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old
or more. The number of children and adolescents was the minor amount, with a 10% less than the
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elderly
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people
. For the
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2050,
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and middle
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age
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would be sharing the position with the highest amount of
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population
, both with over the 40%. The youngest would have the least proportion of all, with
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11. 5%.

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, in Italy middle
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and
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is
prevalent for both years, whereas in Yemen the children, adolescents and middle
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age
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are the ones with the highest percentages for the two years
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