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The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. oREyq
The two pie charts illustrate ordinary daily expenses in a country in 1950 and 2010. Overall, we can see that in the first pie chart the most expenses were spent on housing(72. 1%), but in the second pie chart we observe that expenses on housing are less than in 1950, furthermore increased spending on food (34. 0%)in 2010. As I noted before, expenditures on housing was the most(72. 1%), but there are considerably decreased to 22. 0% in 2010. In second place by expenses in 1950 was food 11. 2%, which remarkably went up to 34. 0% in 2010. In third place by expenses was education (6. 6%), that slightly declined to 6. 3%. What about other and transportation that in 1950 were only 4. 4% and 3. 3%, there are significantly increased to 19. 2% and 14. 0% in 2010. Likewise health care, which negligibly improved to 4. 5%
The two pie charts illustrate ordinary daily expenses in a country in 1950 and 2010.

Overall
, we can
see
that in the
first
pie chart the most expenses
were spent
on housing(72. 1%),
but
in the second pie chart we observe that expenses on housing are less than in 1950,
furthermore
increased spending on food (34. 0%)in 2010.

As I noted
before
, expenditures on housing was the most(72. 1%),
but
there are
considerably
decreased to 22. 0% in 2010. In second place by expenses in 1950 was food 11. 2%, which
remarkably
went up to 34. 0% in 2010.

In third place by expenses was education (6. 6%), that
slightly
declined to 6. 3%.

What about other and transportation that in 1950 were
only
4. 4% and 3. 3%, there are
significantly
increased to 19. 2% and 14. 0% in 2010.
Likewise
health care, which
negligibly
improved
to 4. 5%
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IELTS academic The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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