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The map shows how frenton town change from 1990 and 2012

The map shows how frenton town change from 1990 and 2012 RR8pY
The given maps depict layout of how frenton town changed between 1990 and 2012. Overall, tremendous changes took places during the given time period. School and library remain unchanged. It can be clearly seen that in 1990, on the East side, there was a cafe, park and house. A theatre and shops were situated on the Southeast side. On the left side of street, there were hospital, library, trees and playing fields with trees. A school and a bank were located on the Northwest side. Moving further to the rest of details, in 2012, school and library remain unchanged. Houses and playing fields with trees were developed to blocks of flats. A cafe and park were replaced to a hotel and golf course. A theatre and shops were relocated into a cinema and supermarket. Hospital area was increased but remain unchanged. Trees area was clear to a technopark. The bank was demolished for a restaurant.
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frenton
town
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changed
between 1990 and 2012.

Overall
, tremendous
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changes
took places during the
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given
time period. School and library remain unchanged.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that in 1990, on the East side, there was a
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cafe
, park and
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house
. A
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theatre
and shops
were situated
on the Southeast side. On the
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left
side of street, there were hospital, library,
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trees
and playing fields with
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trees
. A school and a bank
were located
on the Northwest side.

Moving
further
to the rest of
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details
, in 2012, school and library remain unchanged.
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Houses
and playing fields with
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trees
were developed
to blocks of flats. A
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
and park
were replaced
to a hotel and golf course. A
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
and shops
were relocated
into a cinema and supermarket. Hospital area
was increased
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but
remain unchanged.
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Trees
area was
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clear
to a
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technopark
. The bank
was demolished
for a restaurant.
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