Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Changes in city hospital from 2007 to 2010

Changes in city hospital from 2007 to 2010 Dw756
Road accessibility to the city hospital have been illustrated by both maps at two points of time in 2007 and 2010. Overall there has been some distinct structural changes done to hospital road, car park and bus stop. In 2007, city hospital was accessible via hospital road on the southern side connecting with the city road. Staff and public car park was present on the eastern side of the hospital road whereas the bus stop was present on either side of the hospital road. In 2010 the major structural changes were done to the hospital road, two roundabouts were made one on the intersection of hospital road with city road and the other at the intersection of hospital road and the ring road which runs around the city hospital. Staff car park and public car park were divided, public car park was moved to a new location and constructed on the eastern side of the hospital connected with ring road. A new Bus station was built on the western side of the hospital road and was connected with both roundabouts respectively.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Road
accessibility to the city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
have
been illustrated
by both maps at two points of time in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
there has been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
distinct structural
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
done to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
and bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
.

In 2007, city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
was accessible via
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
on the southern side connecting with the city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
. Staff and public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
was present on the eastern side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
whereas the bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
was present on either side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
road.

In 2010 the major structural
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
were done
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
, two roundabouts
were made
one on the intersection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
with city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
and the other at the intersection of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
and the ring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
which runs around the city
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
. Staff
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
and public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
were divided
, public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to a new location and constructed on the eastern side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
connected with ring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
. A new Bus station
was built
on the western side of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
and
was connected
with both roundabouts
respectively
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Changes in city hospital from 2007 to 2010

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    The two diagrams describe the existing and the future development plan of the Islip town center.
    The two diagrams describe the existing and the future development plan of the Islip town center. Overall, there are major modifications noticed during the forecast development. To begin, the countryside is close to the center according to the current map. The main road connects the shops, a school,...
  • 5band
    graph of the number of people going to school
    The percentage of newly graduated students who got a job as an English and French in Ontario teacher every year from 2001 to 2007. -At the beginning, a language or teaching class has a success rate of about 70% in finding a job. Although French teachers are a little less successful with English tea...
  • 5.5band
    The graph below information about Monthly temperature of major three cities.
    The give graph provide data about annually temperature of london, new york and sydney. It is observed that in the temperature of Sydney top of the list, which was 25 degree. It remained stable next two years, Afterwards, a considerably decline was seen between March to july as compare to london and ...
  • 6band
    Hydro electric power plant diagram
    The diagram illustrates the production of hydroelectric power plant. It shows about the various phases of electricity generation and its supply in community. At the starting, the water from the sea is evaporated in the presence of sunlight and collected in the clouds. When the water level is in dec...
  • 6.5band
    export earnings of one country
    This report derives from one bar chart and a table that illustrates export earnings of one country in five different products, petroleum products, engineered products, gems and jewelry, agricultural products, and textiles, between 2015 and 2016. Overall, what stands out from the graphs is that wher...
  • 6.5band
    The given bar chart presents the rate of renewable energy in total energy production in four different countries (Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey) from 1997 to 2010.
    The given bar chart presents the rate of renewable energy in total energy production in four different countries (Australia, Sweden, Iceland, and Turkey) from 1997 to 2010. In general, what stands out from the graph is that Iceland consumed the highest percentage and the percentage of renewable ene...