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The pie chart below gives information on favorite social media channel from 2011 to 2013. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant The report has to contain from 150 to 180 words.:

The pie chart below gives information on favorite social media channel from 2011 to 2013. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant The report has to contain from 150 to 180 words. : pLjK2
The pie charts illustrate how popular 5 five different types of social network are. It is clear that the proportion of users who used Facebook witnessed a moderate decline over the period. By contrast, there was an slightly increasing ascending trend in the figures for the other platforms social communication. In 2011, there was 59% of people who chose Facebook, compared to those of Twitter, and Linkedln which were 21% and 10% respectively. Besides, the figure for Google+ was similar to that for Pinterest, at 5% each. One year later, Facebook still dominated the number of users market share of social platforms, at 49%. However, this figure decreased slightly by 10% in comparison to since 2011. In addition, other's social media channels underwent insignificant increases, with a 2% increase for Twitter and LinkedIn, 5% increase for Google+ and 4% increase for Pinterest Twitter and Linkedln with 2%, Google+ with 5%, Pinterest with 4%. The year 2013 saw a quick drop in the proportion of Facebook users to 38%, while the jump of others social network were not considerable, just from 2 to 4%.
The pie charts illustrate how popular 5 five
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network are.

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communication.

In 2011, there was 59% of
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people
who chose Facebook, compared to those of Twitter, and
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Linkedln
which were 21% and 10%
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.
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, the figure for Google+ was similar to that for Pinterest, at 5% each.

One year later, Facebook
still
dominated the number of users market share of
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social
platforms, at 49%.
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, this figure decreased
slightly
by 10%
in comparison
to since 2011.
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, other's
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social
media channels underwent insignificant
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increases
, with a 2%
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increase
for Twitter and LinkedIn, 5%
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for Google+ and 4%
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increase
for Pinterest Twitter and
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Linkedln
with 2%, Google+ with 5%, Pinterest with 4%.

The year 2013
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a quick drop in the proportion of Facebook users to 38%, while the jump of others
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network were not considerable,
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from 2 to 4%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart below gives information on favorite social media channel from 2011 to 2013. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant The report has to contain from 150 to 180 words. :

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