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The graph demonstrates telephone calls put into categories in the us from 2005 to 2012. Write a report of at least 150 words.

The graph demonstrates telephone calls put into categories in the us from 2005 to 2012. Write a report of at least 150 words. 7r272
The vertical bar graph illustrates the information about telephonic calls in united states of America by different call types like local, national and international, mobiles in the year 2005 to 2012 Overall, it is vivid that all type of categories have fluctuations. In the beginning of 2005 the local-fixed line is on top on the graph and it is also on the top in the year ending of the graph. Rest of categories are also follow the upward trend Accordingly, the local fixed time minutes in 2005 is about 70 thousand and in the year 2006 to 2009 the experienced flex are goes on and it will be remain stable to the year 2009 with approximately 90 thousand. After the year 2009 the graph follow the downward trending the year 2012 the graph hitting a low point a out 70 thousand
The vertical bar
graph
illustrates the information about telephonic calls in
united states of America
by
different
call types like local, national and international, mobiles in the
year
2005 to 2012
Overall
, it is vivid that all type of categories have fluctuations. In the beginning of 2005 the local-
fixed
line is on top on the
graph
and it is
also
on the top in the
year
ending of the
graph
. Rest of categories are
also
follow
the upward trend
Accordingly
, the local
fixed
time minutes in 2005 is about 70 thousand and in the
year
2006 to 2009 the experienced flex are goes on and it will be
remain
stable to the
year
2009 with approximately 90 thousand.
After
the
year
2009 the
graph
follow the downward trending the
year
2012 the
graph
hitting a low point
a
out 70
thousand
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IELTS academic The graph demonstrates telephone calls put into categories in the us from 2005 to 2012. Write a report of at least 150 words.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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