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The pie chart and table give information about the total value and source of fish imported to to the us between 1992 and 2000

The pie chart and table give information about the total value and source of fish imported to to the us between 1992 and 2000 WyEnq

The 3 pie chart illustrates the source of imported fish to USA from different countries during the period of 1992 to 2000, In Addition to that, there is a data table is also provided with information about the value of money in those time phrase. Overall, it is clear from the graph that others group are the major distributors of fish to USA in these periods. The contribution of China and Canada varying at different stages so unable to explain which one have least contribution. In details, from the first graph we can understand that in 1992, the Canada is the most sifficant supplier of fish to USA with 60% in contrast to that in the 3rd graph they were least contributor. In case of China, they suppliered 30% in 2000, which is highest values of them. Rest of the years China's contribution was less compare to Canada and other group. On the other hand, the other group of countries have a constant impact in the supply thought out the years. They begin with 27% in 1992 and end with 42% in 2000. The highest values of 46% in 1998. Now as per the data information of value of money. In 1988 (6. 57), 1992(8. 57)and 2002(10. 57) so in 14 years period, each year the value of money increased constantly.

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