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The diagrams show the developments that had been taken in Ships mouth over a period 15 years from 1995 to 2010. At first glance, it is noticeable that ships mouth witnessed a dramatic transformation over the given period, becoming considerably less green and more built up. Looking at the pictures in more detail, the trees both in the north-west and south-east part of the town had been cut down to construct apartment blocks and airport. There had been one station in the south in 1995 and during 15-year-period another station was built in the north of the city. The church which had been located in the north-east side had been knocked down for construction of the pub. Factory to the left side of the city center had been demolished and shopping center was constructed. New football stadium was built in the south during the given period. In addition, the roads for cars were converted into pedestrians. Finally, the last change in the residential area which had been situated to the right of the roads in 1995 saw an expansion. There were skyscrapers in that place in 2010.
The diagrams
show
the developments that had
been taken
in Ships mouth over a period 15 years from 1995 to 2010.

At
first
glance, it is noticeable that ships mouth witnessed a dramatic transformation over the
given
period, becoming
considerably
less green and more built up.

Looking at the pictures in more detail, the trees both in the north-west and south-east part of the town had been
cut
down to construct apartment blocks and airport. There had been one station in the south in 1995 and during 15-year-period another station
was built
in the north of the city.

The church which had
been located
in the north-east side had
been knocked
down for construction of the pub. Factory to the
left
side of the city center had
been demolished
and shopping center
was constructed
. New football stadium
was built
in the south during the
given
period.
In addition
, the roads for cars
were converted
into pedestrians.
Finally
, the last
change
in the residential area which had
been situated
to the right of the roads in 1995
saw
an expansion. There were skyscrapers in that place in 2010.
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