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The bar graph shows the education level by age in 2010 for UK.

The bar graph shows the education level by age in 2010 for UK. ke36W

The ostensible bar graph details the information about the proportion of eduvative individuals in the England on the basis of five various age levels during the single year of 2010. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that there was a similar pattern witness by 16-25 and 35-50 age groups with 71% university degree, 20% school certificate and 9% no qualifications, Whilst university degree achievers proportion was uplifted by 5% (76%) for 24-35 ages, on the contrary 5% reduction was experienced for school certificate but no qualifications trend was remained steady by 9%. Turning to the remaining information, it can be judged that half(50%)percentage of older onus had graduated degree and that was followed by school certificate and no qualifications with 20%and 30% respectively. In contrast, the majority of people who were associated with over 75 years old were mostly uneducated with 72% proportion and merely a quarter percentage (25%) of masses had university degree compared to just 3%school certificate. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that except older demographics othe remaining age groups were educated with degrees and certigicates.

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