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The pictures illustrate the processes of making and recycling the glass bottles.

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The pictures illustrate the processes of making and recycling the glass bottles. It is clear that there are four and five steps in glass production and recycling respectively. While in the making process, it starts with mixing and ends up with producing complete products, the beginning of reprocessing is collecting used glasses and molding them into the new ones is the final step. Looking at the manufacturing diagram, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together, then the miscellany is melted by the glass furnace with almost 1500C hot. After that, the molten substance is shaped by blowing and producing process is finished with glass containers as products. In reclaiming, after the amassment of previously used bottles, then they are sorted according to their color and the impurities of the components then are eliminated by ablutionary operation. The last two steps bear resemblance to the middle of producing process, which are crushing, melting the glasses and molding them into the brand-new items.
The pictures illustrate the
processes
of making and recycling the
glass
bottles.

It is
clear
that there are four and five steps in
glass
production and recycling
respectively
. While in the making
process
, it
starts
with mixing and ends up with producing complete products, the beginning of reprocessing is collecting
used
glasses and molding them into the new ones is the final step.

Looking at the manufacturing diagram, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals
are mixed
together, then the miscellany
is melted
by the
glass
furnace with almost 1500C hot. After that, the molten substance
is shaped
by blowing and producing
process
is finished
with
glass
containers as products.

In reclaiming, after the
amassment
of previously
used
bottles, then they
are sorted
according to their color and the impurities of the components then
are eliminated
by
ablutionary
operation. The last two steps bear resemblance to the middle of producing
process
, which are crushing, melting the glasses and molding them into the brand-new items.
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IELTS academic The pictures illustrate the processes of making and recycling the glass bottles.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
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