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The pictures illustrate changes which have taken place in a particular art gallery from 2005 to the present.

The pictures illustrate changes which have taken place in a particular art gallery from 2005 to the present. peGDL
The pictures illustrate changes which have taken place in a particular art gallery from 2005 to the present. Overall, the layout of the art gallery has been significantly changed, particularly on the left-hand side of the building. A number of existing features have been renovated and converted, while a number of new facilities have been added to the building in general. In 2005, there was a café and shop in the rear-left corner of the building. However, the café has been removed and the room is now strictly a gallery shop. Meanwhile, the three exhibition rooms on the right-hand side of the building remain unchanged, and a new lift has been installed next to exhibition room 3, making the stairway to the upper floor smaller. The gallery office, which was situated between exhibition room 4 and the old café, has also been removed and the area is now occupied by three vending machines. Exhibition room 4 has now been divided into two different areas; a temporary exhibition room and a children’s play area. Meanwhile, the reception desk has been moved closer to the centre of the entrance hall, while a wheelchair ramp has been added to the front entrance.
The pictures illustrate
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changes
which have taken place in a particular art
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gallery
from 2005 to the present.

Overall
, the layout of the art
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gallery
has been
significantly
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changed
,
particularly
on the
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left
-hand side of the
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building
. A number of existing features have
been renovated
and converted, while a number of new facilities have been
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added
to the
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building
in general
.

In 2005, there was a café and shop in the rear-
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left
corner of the
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building
.
However
, the café has
been removed
and the
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room
is
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now
strictly
a
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gallery
shop. Meanwhile, the three exhibition
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rooms
on the right-hand side of the
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building
remain unchanged, and a new lift has
been installed
next
to exhibition
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room
3, making the stairway to the upper floor smaller.

The
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gallery
office, which
was situated
between exhibition
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room
4 and the
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old
café, has
also
been removed
and the area is
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now
occupied by three vending machines. Exhibition
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room
4 has
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now
been divided
into two
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different
areas; a temporary exhibition
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room
and a children’s play area. Meanwhile, the reception desk has been
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moved
closer to the
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centre
of the entrance hall, while a wheelchair ramp has been
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added
to the front entrance.
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IELTS academic The pictures illustrate changes which have taken place in a particular art gallery from 2005 to the present.

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