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I prefer to This
phrase/word
(depending on the
context)
can be
potentially
replaced with:
exploituse
You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalpublic
You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withtransittransportshipmentshippingtransportation
.
I
This
phrase/word
(depending on the
context)
can be
potentially
replaced with:
reckonassumebelieveconsiderthink
this way for several reasons. The
first
one is convenience. You can take a bus to almost any place you want to go and don’t This
phrase/word
is too
simple
and can
be replaced
with: ought
toought
to worry about finding a parking space.
Secondly
, You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalpublic
You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withtransittransportshipmentshippingtransportation
is
also
cheaper. You This
phrase/word
is too
simple
and can
be replaced
with: ought
tohave
to You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitpay
the fare every time you ride the bus, This
phrase/word
is too
simple
and can
be replaced
with: on the
contraryon
the contrary the cost of owning
a You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withwagonvanautobusridecar
is higher. You This
phrase/word
is too
simple
and can
be replaced
with: ought
tohave
to This
phrase/word
(depending on the
context)
can be
potentially
replaced with:
purchasebuy
the You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withwagonvanautobusridecar
, You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitpay
for gas, You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitpay
for repairs, You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitpay
for a place to park it. It will be greater than the cost of using You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalpublic
You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withtransittransportshipmentshippingtransportation
.
Finally
, You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalpublic
You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withtransittransportshipmentshippingtransportation
is cleaner for the environment than the private You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withwagonvanautobusridecar
. It’s true that You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withwagonvanautobusridecars
dirty the air more than buses do.
Consequently
in conclusion
, I believe that You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalpublic
You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withtransittransportshipmentshippingtransportation
is a much better way to This
phrase/word
(depending on the
context)
can be
potentially
replaced with:
acquireget
around than a private You
use
this
word
too
often
,
consider
replacing it
withwagonvanautobusridecar
is.
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IELTS academic Public transportation or private car

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
404 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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